On October 2 I attended the Rocky Mountain SCBWI conference in Golden, Colorado. The theme (voice) and the presence of an editor I wanted to meet (Cecile Goyette with Dial) persuaded me to take the trip. My critique group buddy, Phyllis, went too, which made it even more fun.
I snagged a critique with Cecile Goyette that was worth every red cent (of the total registration fee--not just the extra critique fee). She critiqued the first chapter and synopsis of my middle grade contemporary fantasy novel. Although we were limited to 15 minutes, she gave me 3+ pages of single-spaced comments that are helping me rethink and revise.
I also attended a critique workshop October 3 with YA novelist Julie Anne Peters (separate fee, also worth every dime). I tried to read her work before the workshop, but her YA books are quite popular with the Ames Public Library patrons. I didn't want to buy them before the conference because I figured I'd buy them there and get them autographed at the same time (which I did). So I was only able to read one of her earlier middle grade "Snob Squad" books. It was fun, but I suspected it was not representative of her current work, which deals with serious stuff like lesbian relationships and a trans-gendered teen.
For Julie's workshop each of us 11 or 12 participants had to submit the first five pages of a novel and a one-page synopsis. I wasn't sure what to send for critique: my completed MG fantasy that Cecile was looking at or my unfinished YA mystery. While I was deciding, Julie emailed critique guidelines to all of us. She sounded really friendly and approachable, so I emailed back and asked for her advice. She suggested the mystery since the fantasy was already being critiqued. So I sent the mystery, which was still basically a first draft (I did a few quickie changes after my in-person critique group discussed it).
I was pleasantly surprised by the reaction to my piece. People actually thought the voice was strong. Huh. And that I really sounded like a teenager (it's in first person). Double huh. Guess I'll keep working on it.
If you ever get the chance to work with Julie Peters, I encourage you to take it. She's a generous, funny, caring person. Learn more about her at
www.julieannepeters.com.
And I highly recommend the Rocky Mountain chapter of SCBWI. The people are warm and friendly. Check out their website at
www.rmcscbwi.org. They publish their informative newsletter
Kite Tales online too.